WALT: use adjectives and similes (also other language fetures) to describe a setting clearly
The lighting cracked the sky into shattered pieces of glass. A weak smell of smoke crawled up my nose making me sneeze. The thunder pushed me under my skin, and my eyes rolled deeper in my skull. My hair was wet and damp like a dog after a swim. The winds stole the front door and ran it over like a buffalo stampede. I hide my body deeper and deeper into the damp flour sacks. The sales of the mill itched the bolts loose.
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