Thursday 12 December 2019

Teaser Week New Similes

New Similes

The wind took the door like a bomb exploding
My feet hurt so bad it felt like I was standing on LEGO.
I cried so hard my eyes where like the ocean waves.

The grass was so wet it was like walking in a puddle.
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1 comment:

  1. Leisha SLJ12 December 2019 at 11:14

    Kia ora Billie,

    My name is Leisha Ferguson and I am with the Summer Learning Journey. I live in Auckland and I am part of the team that will be commenting on your blog posts over the summer. I am really looking forward to getting to know you and reading your interesting blogs :)

    I really love your similes. I think my favourite is the one about the wind and the door. Similes are great to use in creative writing. Do you enjoy writing? Creative writing and poems are my favourite type of writing to do :)

    Keep up your blog posts over this teaser week and get ready to start with Week 1 of the Summer Learning Journey on Monday 16th December. I cannot wait to see what your next blog post will be about!

    Leisha :)

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