Thursday 27 October 2016

My Magic Box Poem



4 comments:

  1. Hi little sis,
    It’s Poppy here, I’ve been looking at your blog. It is very nice to see some of your work on the blog. When I read the smart cookie about Natalie Roney it reminded me of when we went to Bruce Bay sports day. For the the magic box poem you might want think about your colours a bit because it’s hard to read. Could you please make the writing a bit bigger because it is hard to read.

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    1. Hi Big Sis Its Billie here,
      Thank you for this kind, helpful and positive comment.
      Next time I'll pick some different colors. Next time you read some work of mine click on it to see the words better as it will make it bigger.
      Love Billie

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  2. Hi billie It is Summer from grey main school in mamku hub. Well done I really like you Magic Box Poem. I really like what you would put in you magic box. Something for you to work on is to pike good colour because you can not see some of your word but well done

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    1. Hi Summer, its Billie here from Karoro School,
      Thank you for this kind, helpful and positive comment.
      Next time I'll pick some different colours. Next time you read some work of mine click on it to see the words better as it will make it bigger.
      thanks again from Billie

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