Showing posts with label 2019 trm 1. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2019 trm 1. Show all posts

Wednesday, 10 April 2019

Quick Write


WALT: use adjectives and similes (also other language fetures) to describe a setting clearly





The lighting cracked the sky into shattered pieces of glass. A weak smell of smoke crawled up my nose making me sneeze. The thunder pushed me under my skin, and my eyes  rolled deeper in my skull. My hair was wet and damp like a dog after a swim. The winds stole the front door and ran it over like a buffalo stampede. I hide my body deeper and deeper into the damp flour sacks. The sales of the mill itched the bolts loose.

Tuesday, 12 March 2019

A Moment In Time


A Moment In Time


A knife slicing the water . I cut the ground. The speed hits, pulls me over the wake.
Life jacket rubbing on my sunburn like someone grating some cheese. The wind
pulls back my hair, the sun makes my eyes swint. Only seeing yellow!The ski
waving out of control. Adrenaline sinks to my feet, panic does too. Hitting
the\wake like bricks to a wall. Dashing like a dart to the dart board.